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KIDNAPED
Introduction:
The architec OMAR MAURICIO PERDOMO was kidnaped six days ago.It happened last wednesday near of Natural Park Huila'ssnow-capped mountain .
MAIN BODY
The architec Omar M. Rodriguez was in his country house located between San Alfonso-Teruel.Suddenly many people arrived ,they said "We are paramilitares and we need money". After they kidnaped him and took him toward the forest. They moor him of a tree.However the action of police obliged them to leave him free. He walked many kilometers, then he found a friend who took him to Teruel. He was scared and he thought about his wife and his son. He was very worried.
CONCLUSION
Finally today in morning he met with his family. He was free. He is very happy and he is very grateful wiht God and the police. The action of them let him to be free.
Between San Alfonso, Teruel there should be a Period (.) not a Comma (,). Suddenly many people arrived. Do not foget: subject + verb + complement.
ResponderEliminarGood job. do not forget the use of punctuation properly. =)
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ResponderEliminarThanks teacher Martha Hellen.
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